Artificial Sunset (Techno/Electronic)

comments and criticism are appreciated!

I planned to comment on one of your earlier tunes and say it sounds too dry. Was too lazy to do it and now I see there's no need, things got effected just enough - lovely tune you have here. Sounds soundtracky and even somewhat cyberpunk. Can't say too much on mixing by my current soundsystem, but sounds okay on a shitty laptop and headphones.

Thanks Zeekat! I actually thought my last couple tracks were a little too dry also; had a little trouble figuring out what was missing, but this is the result!

smueske sorry it took me so long to get back to you; that's all great advice, when I listened a second time I'm pretty sure all of the things you mentioned were problems. Tried to account for all of that in the piece I'm about to post, still not perfect though :/